Thursday, October 14, 2010

Response on Chapter 10

I thought that chapter 10 was not as sad as the previous chapters, it was actually hopeful when he started to escape. Then when he got caught and lost all hope it got sad, but not for long. He returned to Baltimore AGAIN which is sort of a neutral thing because he liked it there but he didn't gain the freedom that he would have liked to. I don't really have much to say about this chapter other than it had a few mixed emotions. Hopefully later on at the end of the book he succeeds in escaping.
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4 comments:

  1. Colin FischerOctober 14, 2010 at 9:02 AM

    Haha very nice i like how theres some sort of a question in there, maybe i see it or not but even then its pretty good and hopefully he escapes soon

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  2. ElenaOctober 14, 2010 at 9:03 AM

    Hi blake,
    well lets see. your blog is interesting i do feel that maybe you could take a little bit more time and write more. I do agree with you there were many mixxed up emotions. Im happy he is starting to escape also:] butt sad that he doesnt suceed.<<<how evr you speel it..lol

    anyways good bloggin...:]]

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  3. JennyOctober 14, 2010 at 9:03 AM

    Blake,
    I think that you could've left a longer and more thought out response. I did like how you described how you felt then put that emotion to some place in the text.

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  4. BreannaOctober 14, 2010 at 9:19 AM

    Hola Blake,


    Well I know you have more potential then what I see here, so I agree with the other people that you could have taken more time to make it longer and more detail, but other than that I think it was good and if you expand more on your wriiting, then one, it will be longer and two, it will have detail that everybody loves.

    -Breanna.

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